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		<title>Among Us Women, by Joan Lerner</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 23 Feb 2012 10:00:49 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jane Smith</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[There’s no filter on Joan Lerner’s angry, grieving, hopeful heroine. Her emotions bubble just beneath the surface and regularly boil over. Among Us Woman is a sometimes wondrous, often painful labor of love.” – Steward O’Nan, author of the acclaimed novel, Songs for the Missing “Plotting reminiscent of Susan Isaacs&#8230; with the extras of lush [...]<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=theselfpublishingreview.wordpress.com&amp;blog=16978481&amp;post=1310&amp;subd=theselfpublishingreview&amp;ref=&amp;feed=1" width="1" height="1" />]]></description>
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		<title>Mousetrapped, by Catherine Ryan Howard</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Feb 2012 10:00:25 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jane Smith</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Three big dreams, two mouse ears and one J-1 visa. What could possibly go wrong in the happiest place on earth? When Catherine Ryan Howard decides to swap the grey cloud of Ireland for the clear skies of the Sunshine State, she thinks all of her dreams &#8211; working in Walt Disney World, living in [...]<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=theselfpublishingreview.wordpress.com&amp;blog=16978481&amp;post=1272&amp;subd=theselfpublishingreview&amp;ref=&amp;feed=1" width="1" height="1" />]]></description>
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		<title>The Discovery of Socket Greeny: Tony Bertauski</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 05 Oct 2011 09:00:05 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jane Smith</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[SOCKET ALWAYS FELT LIKE THE PEOPLE AROUND HIM WERE A BUNCH OF FAKES. HE WAS RIGHT. ### The Discovery of Socket Greeny proved rather tricky for me to review. It&#8217;s confusing, inconsistent, the characters behave bizarrely for little apparent reason, and there are many instances of heavily overwritten text: but the writer&#8217;s voice is strong [...]<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=theselfpublishingreview.wordpress.com&amp;blog=16978481&amp;post=785&amp;subd=theselfpublishingreview&amp;ref=&amp;feed=1" width="1" height="1" />]]></description>
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		<title>Never Mind Yaar: K Mathur</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 28 Sep 2011 09:00:46 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jane Smith</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Never Mind Yaar K. Mathur’s vivid descriptions bring the college and its students to life. Immensely pleasurable and thought provoking. When longtime friends Binaifer and Louella meet Shalini Dyal at Gyan Shakti College, Gyan full knowledge and Shakti full strength, a true friendships that transcends cultural and religious backgrounds is born. Louella is a Christian, [...]<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=theselfpublishingreview.wordpress.com&amp;blog=16978481&amp;post=778&amp;subd=theselfpublishingreview&amp;ref=&amp;feed=1" width="1" height="1" />]]></description>
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		<title>Root Cause: James W Crissman</title>
		<link>http://theselfpublishingreview.wordpress.com/2011/09/21/root-cause-james-w-crissman/</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Sep 2011 09:00:52 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jane Smith</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[When Bruce Dinkle takes up the cause of eating only local food, his zeal badly exceeds his judgement. After alienating his family by enforcing a strict locavore and urban agriculturist lifestyle, he abandons them by bicycle on a quixotic quest to learn where food comes from. He quickly becomes enmeshed in a small Michigan farming [...]<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=theselfpublishingreview.wordpress.com&amp;blog=16978481&amp;post=774&amp;subd=theselfpublishingreview&amp;ref=&amp;feed=1" width="1" height="1" />]]></description>
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		<title>I Serve: Roseanne E Lortz</title>
		<link>http://theselfpublishingreview.wordpress.com/2011/09/14/i-serve-roseanne-e-lortz/</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 14 Sep 2011 09:00:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jane Smith</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[A tale of ARMS, of DEATH, of LOVE, and of HONOR Set against the turbulent backdrop of the Hundred Years&#8217; War, I SERVE chronicles the story of Sir John Potenhale. A young Englishman of lowly birth, Potenhale wins his way to knighthood on the fields of France. He enters the service of Edward, the Black [...]<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=theselfpublishingreview.wordpress.com&amp;blog=16978481&amp;post=768&amp;subd=theselfpublishingreview&amp;ref=&amp;feed=1" width="1" height="1" />]]></description>
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		<title>Flight To Paradise: Mike Coe</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Sep 2011 09:00:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Eighteen year old Keri Hart&#8217;s life was turned upside down when her Southern high society mother insisted, &#8220;Now Sugah, I think it would be best if you ended it with Ryan Mitchell&#8230;&#8221; only days before his leaving Atlanta to attend the United States Naval Academy. Fast-forward nine years, Keri is a Miami-based flight attendant; Ryan [...]<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=theselfpublishingreview.wordpress.com&amp;blog=16978481&amp;post=372&amp;subd=theselfpublishingreview&amp;ref=&amp;feed=1" width="1" height="1" />]]></description>
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		<title>The DeerHunter: BrokenSword</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 31 Aug 2011 09:00:57 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jane Smith</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[The hunter Liam Michaels lies wounded, bleeding in the forests of the Canaan mountains. For him, the world is a bloody sky of red beneath which he can&#8217;t move. The shooter Ian Lambert stands above him, persecuted by his past. For him, there&#8217;s only thoughts of how long he must now track the crippled buck. [...]<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=theselfpublishingreview.wordpress.com&amp;blog=16978481&amp;post=701&amp;subd=theselfpublishingreview&amp;ref=&amp;feed=1" width="1" height="1" />]]></description>
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		<title>Randolph&#8217;s One Bedroom:  Andrew Oberg</title>
		<link>http://theselfpublishingreview.wordpress.com/2011/08/24/randolphs-one-bedroom-andrew-oberg/</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 24 Aug 2011 09:00:48 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jane Smith</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[When winter stretches on for half the year and people are forced to spend entirely too much time indoors, strange things are bound to happen. Randolph&#8217;s city of Sornsville, and the local coffee shop he works at, are no exceptions. But through all the irate customers and cryogenically preserved mammals, the drinks that magically disappear [...]<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=theselfpublishingreview.wordpress.com&amp;blog=16978481&amp;post=689&amp;subd=theselfpublishingreview&amp;ref=&amp;feed=1" width="1" height="1" />]]></description>
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		<title>Dreaming of Deliverance: R E Chambliss</title>
		<link>http://theselfpublishingreview.wordpress.com/2011/08/17/dreaming-of-deliverance-r-e-chambliss/</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Aug 2011 09:00:14 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Jane Smith</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Five years ago when Lindsay Paulson, a naive college student and talented distance runner, was 18, she was convicted of drug smuggling. Now, halfway through a 10-year prison sentence, she begins having what seem to be dreams, in which she leaves her cell in the night and visits another reality called Trae. Dreaming of Deliverance [...]<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=theselfpublishingreview.wordpress.com&amp;blog=16978481&amp;post=705&amp;subd=theselfpublishingreview&amp;ref=&amp;feed=1" width="1" height="1" />]]></description>
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